It's kind of weird but it is refreshing. And the ending is satisfying.

Femo! xD Lol I just can't

I truly indefinitely and totally loved this!

This was perfect.

LOL! I love the characters so much...the plot's pretty realistic too! kudos!

Feedback time! I actually quite liked the first version, the new one is good too... but i liked the casual feel to the first one... plus... I wanna read about their date!

Are you updating soon? :D

i likw the original style. conversation carries us through daily lives, and this stream of conciousness style allows readers more imaginative freedom. what's important in this story isn't each action and image, but the phone conversations that bring them together, and you can't get as many details over the phone. i felt more a part of the story with the first style, rather than just reading another story. hope this helped you :)

Love the start of the second much better than the first

I found the story very amusing and funny
Love the comedy of it

Yea this story was pretty interesting. I do sort of like it although the second beginning sounds slightly more interesting than the first, It's more insightful.

OMG, THE ENDING! XD lmao

But aside from that, I liked this story. It was very original and really cute, and I do hope you go through with that sequel. :P 3

Hearts from Russle

This story was great and I really enjoyed it! And now its being rewritten so I guess I'll put this on story alert? lol :)

I think the new chapter 1 is better than the old one. It cleared up some questions from before - such as they were joking about having sex. I like the 1st person perspective as well. I definitly enjoyed this whole story, it made me smile. :D

i like the new version of the first chapter. looking forward to see what else is changed about it.

I saw you had 199 reviews and had to review. I don't really have anythign to say other than I am proudly a Feom and very very... not offended by this. I was gonna angry!rant but then I just couldn't work up the energy. Cramps and whatnot. Buhbye.