Oh! -realizations dawns on me- I thought you meant the Daniel through phone, instead of Addison's boyfriend. -cheeky grin- sorry.

ha...

Here's my one cent (I'm not a writer, so it's not worth two): I like some aspects from both versions. I don't mind either first or third person, but from the original version, I actually like the flow of their phone conversation better. It seem like a faster pace, more natural, and fits their personality better. I like the part where Addison thinks that his bf always saying "I miss you baby" is yucky because it's both cute and also let us know that he isn't emotionally vested at all, hence breaking up... I also like his attempt to defend his manliness better in the original and the end where he said that having sex with someone u don't love is wrong... That adds to his adorableness I think.

In the newer version, It's kind of confusing why he'd call his bf if he didn't expect him to be awake that early. Also, Addison explained to Daniel that he's "Addison... Your boyfriend" but Daniel still mistook him for female, so it made me go "huh?". But I do like how u changed the sex with roommate scene

to pretend cuz it made me like Daniel better. But then he used the f word and made me like him less...

Anyway, if I have to choose, I'd say I like the original version better. The only thing that bothered me in the original is the last chapter where Addison said to pick him up but they met somewhere else? And Addison also didnt seem surprise when he sees that Daniel is the guy from the mall. Anyway, You're the author, of course, so if the original bothered you, then you won't get any complaint from me for changing it. It'll be interesting to read a second version of such a cute and wonderful story.

this confused me to no end at first cause i always read the ans last but im glad you continued even thou this is more like a remake :)

OMGOSHOMGOSHOMGOSH

Amazing! I love it! I don't mind the rewrite with Addison going first person, but I like the fact that the story is mainly formatted as one long phone conversation. It's different and interesting!

Interesting start to the rewrite. I'm looking forward to seeing more.

OH WTF

that is so not an end

Lol, I love the randomness of this story :)

Quick question though, it says there is a sequel? By I can'ts find it :(

Whats it called?

gah

I Died when there was no more... :(

sequel? Oh by the way I know I'm going through and reviewing your stories at random. That's just me. and I clearly enjoy your fics. :)

haha. his mum picked up and they were having phone sex. I laughed so much. I'm evil, truly.

anyways.

love me xx

That was so cute. And I was really excited about the sequel. Then I looked and it wasn't there ): And its been like two years since you finished this story. Please do the sequel?

aww i dont want it to be the end..

I can't believe they met each other without knowing. haha so funny

What's the title of sequel? Because I didn't see it. I want a sequel. All whining aside, that was good and I want to see where it's going.

Loved it! :'D

but i just noticed that you didn't write the sequel D: T0T

I wanted to know how things went with them :(

ZOMG this is so freaking funny, I had to stop to get my breath back. "you threw some pants at my face? Thanks but I'm sure they're not my size" major ROLFing going on, dude! Thanks for brightning my day (fine, it's 11 PM and I need to get up at 5 AM, but still)