Reviews for Hello? Oh, sorry wrong number |
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![]() ![]() Can you please update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this story, it's great...I hope you update soon |
![]() ![]() ![]() oh... my... god.. i am in LOVE with this story! it's so GOOD! and talk about the massive cliffhanger! XD oh, whoops, should be doing my Australian Studies assignment, catcahz! |
![]() ![]() ![]() OMG UPDATE SOON! I want to know what happens next! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Cliff hanger much? lol. Update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() aw! aren't they just the cutest? great writing ! i love the story, it really rocks. lol. i liked daniel's line - "We're not together, i just gave her my sperm - er, hi, nice to meet you.." or whatever it was ( couldnt be bothered to check the exact wording) anyway, please update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() aw, why was the phone sex cut short? well great story and I hope you update soon. |
![]() ![]() Hahahahaha! This is great I love it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aw. They are so cute. All your characters are cute. I even like Jesse, even if he's getting in the way of everything. Can't wait for the next update. |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was hilarous. I liked how he kept calling back the random stranger. YOu might want to add more detail inbetween dialoge cause i wasnt really sure what was going on, and more about why Addision dumped him, but with out it its still good. |
![]() ![]() ![]() PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON! |
![]() ![]() ![]() OMG! Wickedly awesome chapter! |
![]() ![]() ![]() thahaha! i love this story! everything is so funny and nothing is expectable...i think that's a word, but i lovev it! cant wait for more! |
![]() ![]() This story's really going places at a good pace, it's really flowing along nicely, and I like all of the characters, especially-of course-Daniel(NICE DANIEL!) and Addison. I hope that you put the next chapter up soon though. |
![]() ![]() Ok, first of all forgetting Addison for a sec. cause Daniel with his roomate sounds hot, like seriously WTF?. Man a couple guys I know would've had reactions from what the hell is this guy screwing with me, or is he in love with his roomate to wow ok I don't know him/wtf? Going back to Addison-he's persisant and interesting I mean seriously of course if I were in his shoes I wouldn't have been to stunned to say dude I'm a guy not a chick, of course I like how this chapter's put together. |