Reviews for Leading the Way
D.E. Sinatra chapter 1 . 5/10/2008
For me, this poem was a lot more impactful than the other poem I just reviewed. It just seemed put together in a stronger manner. So I have to say, I think I might like this one better.

Again, there are a few collections of lines scattered through the poem that strike me as stronger and more impactful than other parts of the poem, but on the whole, this one is fairly well put together.

nice :)
bipedalcooney chapter 1 . 10/8/2006
Nicely written, I like this poem a lot. Very sincere. Great work and write more.
bread and circuses chapter 1 . 10/7/2006
Interesting use of rhyme. I like it. [Trip, I’ll catch you/ Then disappear/ Hide, until you need me there.] - I love those lines, and it feels like they rhyme even though they don't. This poem has a very nice flow. Great job!
La Gitane chapter 1 . 10/7/2006
Oh, very sweet. I love the tone and voice of the poem, the quiet sturdiness beneath the lines. The opening two and a half life lines are lovely, btw, instantly personal and sincere.

Nicely done. :)