Reviews for Hail of Gold
temerity chapter 1 . 11/25/2006
There is such a lovely flow to this poem. The rhyming is not forced (the only exception I could find being "she sought her love through soul and maw.") A poignant tragedy, I think...the emotion is very clear, and consistent throughout the piece.

Always write on :)
Lady Aether chapter 1 . 10/9/2006
Excellent, though I don't expect anything less. I really liked it, its beauty in despair.