Reviews for Never Wanted Prince Charming |
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![]() ![]() i forgot if i reviewed or not. anyways, i like your story! :) i'm a sucker for the older brother's friend angle, and yours is nicely done! only, there are a couple of things that don't add up. i mean, preston punched ian just for that? preston's behavior is strange, all in all. haha. he's so sullen and stuff. but he's still hot. as is ian. i'm starting to like both of them much. i also like the other characters, though, like andie and jase. hope you update soon! (and update the garrett story too!) :) |
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![]() ![]() ![]() awesome story so far! i'm really liking ian. ) |
![]() ![]() this story is so cue! |
![]() ![]() ![]() that was good what about Jase though he was barely in this chapter please update soon |
![]() ![]() Wow she's pathetic. Blaming everything on Callie? I'm surprised Jase or whatever. is even attracted to her. |
![]() ![]() so...what's Reine's love based on if not for Preston's looks, or other superficial things? She just says, "Oh, I don't want Prince Charming. I want him." And doesn't give ANY reason. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Interesting. Update soon. Can't wait to see what happens. |
![]() ![]() so... reine hasn't had a friend since callie. then all of a sudden out pops jase, then out pops ian. why is it that she can't make friends, but boys start liking her out of the blue? it's kinda... unrealistic. and uhh... preston's way too angry. not exactly the image of a attractive character. all he does is get pissed and turn colors. whoop-de-doo. and marc appears out of nowhere to be protective... there's got to be more to the plot. |
![]() ![]() ![]() aw. thats adorable...yeah, but what happened to callie? She woudl have been at the party, no? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hi, this story's hysterical! I'm adding it to my favorites ) One question though; who exactly beat up Ian? Reine told the principal it was Marc, but later its said to be Preston... |
![]() ![]() ![]() YAY! you updated! Can't wait to read more.. Update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ah, I found a story that is right. :) It's a story that I think isn't cliche, but still has a few quirks to it... So why did Jase fade out when Ian fades in? (New reviewer as you can see.) XxEsseveraxX |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow, this story is off to a really good start. I definitely like it and can't wait to read more. Update soon please. Take care~ |
![]() ![]() hahaha, i freaking love this story! update soon :) |