Reviews for Dead As Your World
Wylloa chapter 1 . 10/18/2006
...oh wow. WOW! This is so amazing. Its scary too, because even if this is a fiction based poem, i can relate to it. I love this...it manages so many emotions and yet still makes sense. ITs like you took each and every thing you felt and wrote it down and it didnt look like jiberish.

You left me a few reviews saying how you wish you could write like me,(my name used to be A Million Little Pieces) but jeez! This beats even my best!

Awesome Job!

This made my favorites!
L. Sherman chapter 1 . 10/9/2006
O_O... That's how I feel right now. Just WOW. 'Course, I think I read this a few days prior, but it need be said that this is excellent. Your best piece yet, I'd wager.

So utterly heartfelt, and the words just ooze emotion from every syllable. It flows seamlessly - though in the last line, the "As" at the beginning sort of takes away from the smooth-ness a bit, but it's nothing too significant.

I'm very glad to be able to read this though, because now that it's post it I can happily add it to my favorites. _ Kudos to you on another stunning bit of poetry.

L. Kantenseter
Sarah Havoc chapter 1 . 10/9/2006
Very powerful and a very excellent poem
pun.defined chapter 1 . 10/9/2006
Wow, this is really good and I can somewhat relate. Very honest and heartfelt.