Kudos! Great story!

I just want you to know that this was the dumbest and poorly written fic I’ve finished in about 10 years. All characters were not thought out, plot was all over the place and poorly executed, and the romance wasn’t well paced and frankly left much to be desired. Jacob and Noah had no chemistry and one super sore spot was how you made Jacob into kind of an idiot? Like this man is one of the best assassins and he doesn’t know biology? Like you’re telling me that this man was raised to kill in different ways and doesn’t know basic human biology? He only knows how to pick up a gun? Cain was a useless character and should’ve been omitted entirely. Andes and Kai were verging on useless. The entirety of Bobby’s existence.. pointless . The END? FUCKING POINTLESS
you’re telling us that JACKIE would have forgiven the man who TORTURED HER? I’d like the 3 hours I wasted but honestly you keep em and use them to learn to write better. Or better yet just stop writing. Like wow.

Very good story! I love stories with an actual plot. I was a little disappointed there wasn't more in the last chapter here about Noah and Caid coming together... it seemed a little abrupt. But overall, loved it!

I really really REALLY like your stories. Because they don't deal with only romance and one specific relationship. After reading this chapter, I am excited to the max. Never knew how action could bring adrenaline to me! Amazing writing:) Gonna go off and read more now ()

Really good story had me going thinking Jacob dead and gone love happy endings

I was about ready to kill you when Jacob's scene arrived at the end. I was seriously trying to hold back tears. Hence the word trying. You are a marvellous author that deserves more reviews. I love the story from beginning and ending. If anything, the way you separate the personalities of each character into their own unique blend is what I enjoyed the most. This story was well thought of. It could use a good ol' polish but it is well written and as someone else said, it took me on a rollercoaster ride as the events began to unfold. I really, really, really, really, really, wish if you could do at least a one-shot on Nano to see how Jacob and Noah are coping. Oh and you really had me frightened the moment Noah became angry with Jacob but the desperation Noah had when the sniper shot at his love erased all fear as I saw that Noah seemed to love Jacob deeply. That part was really important in the story. I'm glad you ended it the way you did. It had a bittersweet feeling but the sweetened ending overruled any acid aftertaste I would have had. The ending, in other words, was as perfect as I would have loved it to be. Thank you for sharing such a delightful story with us!

good story. i wish it had more of a denouement. but great, intense, suspenseful story!

OoooOOO! i can't make up my mind if kai is good or bad...hmmmm!

yay! great story! and there's hints of more characters coming in...the suspense continues!

aww, one of my fave authors read this, once upon a time. great job so far. thanks for sharing!

this was the best AWWW worthy final chapter EVER! I so LOVE this story it took me like 5 hours to read it all but dang was it all worth it! i fell in freaking love with Cain i think he was the sweetest kid ever and i just imagine Bobby and but i cant help but just think of this little Hispanic kid just running around with a wood sword. God im so glad you took your time and created this beautiful and great story!

Keep up the good work!

I like it but its REALLY confusing that the amount of time the mission is suppose to take keeps switching between 3 weeks and 3 months...

AHHH! That was so mean! I thought Jacob was dead until those last few paragraphs. I was about to start bawling my eyes out!

Man, I LOVE this story so much! I just couldn't stop reading it once I started! I've read so many stories about assassins falling in love with their target or something like that, but they're all guy/girl relationships, and I always thought it would be cool to read something like that where the two main characters are guys and they fall in love. I'm so glad there was a happy ending, though! :D

Awesome! I'm glad it ended well... Good job!

Ok, it's pretty much official that this is the BEST slash story I have read so far! And I've read over a hundred, including 2 of your other stories, but this one just REALLY got to me. 3 I absolutely loved this. A job well done. [: