Reviews for Freedom
Suze-Booze chapter 1 . 5/31/2007
this reminds me of this poem we had to do for english in grade 8... lol!
morbid-fantasies chapter 1 . 10/12/2006
Beautiful
Forever Forbidden chapter 1 . 10/10/2006
"Even kids with no future talk about it, understand it"

I very much enjoyed the last lines. It would have been a bit more suspenseful had you drawn it out with perhaps a "Talk about it...need it...feel it" on different lines. xD You don't have to listen to my blabber, otherwise great! Keep up da nice work.
Amerie Marque chapter 1 . 10/10/2006
Even kids with no future talk about it, understand it.

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I liked that line the most. It could be more powerful if you wanted it to be. It seems rather weak to me, but overall good.