Reviews for we could be equal
Annaece's Forsaken Corpse chapter 1 . 10/10/2006
'every time i see you in the hallways of school, a part of me still wishes that nothing had ever happened'

i see him everyday too & i know it's hard. the last stanza was incredibly powerful.

' i just want you back'

something about that just hit me hard...i don't know what it is. your words in this me, was kind of like saying

'i'm still hurt, but i want things to get better'

i love this piece.

'a part of me wants to wipe the sadness hidden in your eyes'

that line was really sweet. i wish i could think of another word. seems to me that you were a really good friend to have cared so much...

i just want to talk to him too...
morbid-fantasies chapter 1 . 10/10/2006
I loved this. You're, like, my poetic inspiration. Congrats on stealing my heart and prodding it with your pen/pencil/keyboard.