Reviews for Can You?
blueroseofice chapter 1 . 10/18/2007
I love your writting! The way you arrange the words would be distracting if the poem its self wasn't perfect. Which it is, so the arrangement it good. Short poem that hits the nail on the head.
HeartofDiamonds chapter 1 . 12/31/2006
wow..i've felt this way before. Good job.
mindOFdeliriousUNREST chapter 1 . 10/19/2006
all questions i'd like to ask people. i like it, even though it's really short.
mizu no kokoro chapter 1 . 10/18/2006
i can feel the definite feel of abandon in this. good work

keep writing
Moondog Dozier chapter 1 . 10/17/2006
The questioning aspect really enhances the relatability. I like the tone that you've created through the word choice. Well done.
CrazyTurtles chapter 1 . 10/11/2006
I really like this one. Really good job.
bR0k3N chapter 1 . 10/11/2006
kathleen30263 chapter 1 . 10/11/2006
Very depressing D, but good.
tamarkaph2006 chapter 1 . 10/10/2006
This sounds very desparate. Hope all is well with you :-)
braindead1345 chapter 1 . 10/10/2006
So pretty...okay not pretty,buit know. cool...
commemorativemisery chapter 1 . 10/10/2006
omg...this has me written all over it...

this is soo good! keep up the good work!
Ryumaru shogunate chapter 1 . 10/10/2006
WOW! DARK... Just the way I like it! No hope for the masses! Keep up the god work!