Reviews for Ramp and Ride
deefective chapter 1 . 7/31/2008
Well, this is a well written poem. I really like the imagery you create with your word choice. You really bring the scene to life. But at the same time I don't think it should have been this long. I don't know why, but it seems like it should've been a shorter poem. Some verses also seemed unnecessary. But overall, nice job.
Violet Marx chapter 1 . 10/12/2006
You know, when you called me a very influential writer in your review, I just about burst out laughing. Me, a ten-year-old girl? An influential writer? I really don't think I could ever be THAT! But, still, I'm deeply flattered. And, yeah, you got the message of Color Outside The Inky Black Lines just right.

Sometimes I think your poetry might almost be better as prose, but you pretty much pull the poetry thing off. What I really love about this is that unless it started at the very end, I didn't even notice that you started describing the rain. That is an excellent talent to have!

Violet Marx