|Reviews for Decay|
| Meadow Frost chapter 1 . 2/1/2012
Well put. It's now one of my favorites.
| pedosmile chapter 1 . 10/26/2006
Wow. Very powerful. But with so many little words. I agree with you.
| Kalopsia chapter 1 . 10/25/2006
this is actually a pretty cool poem. the first line sets up the poem as if you are responding to someone and just don't give a damn (possibly?- i think this is very chic) and also, you shed new light on the meaning of 'beauty'...maybe its sarcastic, or ironic even? this is going on my fav's. good job - this never happens
| Basara chapter 1 . 10/13/2006
yet the real beauty remains in the heart which most people fail to see...yes the rose' petals wilts but the real beauty remains with those who see it...
| sunday night sky chapter 1 . 10/12/2006
this is an interesting and thought provoking piece. i love the laid back air of the haiku, as though the point really is simple and no one else can see it yet. lovely. :D
| Moondog Dozier chapter 1 . 10/11/2006
Interestingly well put viewpoint. Very well written haiku.