Reviews for Decay
Meadow Frost chapter 1 . 2/1/2012
Well put. It's now one of my favorites.
pedosmile chapter 1 . 10/26/2006
Wow. Very powerful. But with so many little words. I agree with you.
Kalopsia chapter 1 . 10/25/2006
this is actually a pretty cool poem. the first line sets up the poem as if you are responding to someone and just don't give a damn (possibly?- i think this is very chic) and also, you shed new light on the meaning of 'beauty'...maybe its sarcastic, or ironic even? this is going on my fav's. good job - this never happens
Basara chapter 1 . 10/13/2006
yet the real beauty remains in the heart which most people fail to see...yes the rose' petals wilts but the real beauty remains with those who see it...

sunday night sky chapter 1 . 10/12/2006
this is an interesting and thought provoking piece. i love the laid back air of the haiku, as though the point really is simple and no one else can see it yet. lovely. :D
Moondog Dozier chapter 1 . 10/11/2006
Interestingly well put viewpoint. Very well written haiku.