The ending was absolutely perfect. This was some story :)

I love this :)

whoa.

this is angst and hurt and rage

but love/lust all the same.

effing brilliant,

honestly.

i'm at a loss for words.

amazing.

this is perfect,

it stands alone perfectly,

but im never satisfied with it comes to things as amazing as these,

i'd love for this to be continued.

This is... Extremely well written.

Poetic, and a story at the same time.

:]

I love it.

The whole thing about pain and hurt; it is needed to live, and control is what takes over.

You've captured all these confusing emotions, physically and emotionally, extremely well, the ending too.

Hurting each other psychologically, instead of physically.

Hoping to read more from you. :]

[ a u z ]

Oh. Oh my. You have no idea how much I love this.

Angsty, as you wrote, but more than that: raging and desperate, rcklessly, honestly beautiful. (It's the black part of me that likes this, though a large part nonetheless.)

*adds to favorite stories*

Amazing, my dear Tuck. Simply amazing.

Brilliant. Delightfully different and desperate. Well done .

That was some ride!

this is so original.I know you ment to most likely have so little of detail but you really dont get a feeling for who the characters are or why they need to feel pain or than to feel that they are all it is amazing and very different than most stories ive seen

wow... this is so... refreshingly different and intriguing.