Reviews for The Marionette
J. L. Tillinghast chapter 1 . 2/27/2008
Damn this was pretty cool. I like the italics intro and outro. I've always loved Supernatural beings that reveal the ultimate reality and ultimately the knowledge makes the narrator or protagonist insane or "illogical." Great story overall and keep at this.
FoxyGrampa chapter 1 . 11/27/2006
That was so totally freaky. It literally put paranoid thoughts into my head. o_o;

Good job, very scary and wiggy. Hehe.
Ecryptic chapter 1 . 10/13/2006
Had no idea where you were going with this story and then blam! YOu hit with the ending and it was perfect. The reason why he went on the second spree was an innovate one. I haven't read anybody use that before.

Any Negatives: If I read correctly, it would seem like he went on a first murder spree then was sent to the hospital. I really can't believe that the courts would allow a man who killed many in horrible ways(judge it by the officers going to the insane asylum) would sprung him loose. Though in truth, I believe that has happen before. So that's a minor detail.

Great story.