Beautiful. I know that the 'sin' you mentioned in the story ravages a lot of churches, yet a lot of people try to ignore it. Thanks for writing this.

This actually brought tears to my eyes. Go you! Very good story. :)

Lust is a tuff thing to deal with. It makes you feel dirty. Once again, work on getting the emotion down on paper. You have wonderful stories. You seem to know where you want them to go. Try remembering how you feel when you are in similar situations, or imagine how you would feel if you were in a similar situation. Focus on those feelings. Work on geting them to say how you "feel".

Again, Great Job!

Breathtakingly beautiful

Loves it! This story was "Amazing Grace"

That was beautiful. It really was. I think a lot of the clergy could identify with his problems, it seemed very tangible. Loved it, tis going on my favourites list. Please keep up the good work