|Reviews for Home On Halloween|
| TragicDreams chapter 1 . 10/20/2007
I like it. It discribes Holloween perfectly. Some of the time the rhyming seemed forced but others didn't. Just work on that. Other than that I really liked it! Keep writing.
| Orual chapter 1 . 11/7/2006
So I'm a bit late for this poem. Oh well, if stores can have Christmas trees up in September, I can review Halloween poetry in November. You had a wonderful rhyme scheme, it didn't sound at all forced and couplets often do. You evoke memories very well; this reminds me of when I used to go trick-or-treating, back before the days of utter exhaustion (swim practice).
The end seems a little random since I didn't catch any romantic implication earlier in the poem. It fits, I suppose, but didn't seem to be where the poem was leading.