That is so cool...Everything really fitted in well.

Wow. what's this man? Okay, first piece of write that doesn't have that much vocabulary. I think I only saw three, but the emotions evoked just... I'm speechless. I can only reread your work over and over... Trying to find a word to explain my emotions. This is just amazing.

Actually, I think it's perfect the way it is now. There's no need to continue this. I like it. Another of my favorites.

My, you really have a talent in writing murder/ mystery stories don't you? You're so cool!

Know what? I only wish I can write half as good. /envy/

I never excelled in novels/one-shots. /sigh/

(Nor do I in poetry. I'm just a plain Jane in a sense)

I really love your stories. They end off so abruptly, but so complete. I'm really at a loss for words.

My last words,

You managed to use words, to create emotions and images that no words can explain.

You're just wonderful. ALL THE WAY!

Very interesting. You expressed the character's feelings well. Nice work.

~Twilight Starr~

Evil, twisted, weirdly liberating. One can only truly live when they have no fear, that is, when everything is already lost. Are we willing to give it up. I'm not sure I get why she would save the woman who stole her boyfriend.

I remember this hehe. Very creepy and well written, but I think you could have added a little more here and there but overall very good!

-The other evil twin

It's kind of creepy...and yes, evil. I don't know if you should continue it or not though I think it would be interesting to see...It seemed a little rushed and not explained after she kills her friend, but other than that, it's good.

Wow..., the brilliance of this story shocks me. And you wrote this in the time limit our teacher gave us? I belieive you, but it seems too good to have been written so quickly :) Personally I dont suggest continuing it, as it seems more like a short stand-alone story than one meant to be continued, but if you have clear a plot in mind, then I would enjoy reading the completed version when it's done. :)