Reviews for Heart Divided |
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![]() ![]() ![]() aww, how sweet. But wait, if he was supposed to rule why would his father starve him and all that...then again his father doesnt seem the nicest of charicters...ah well i suppose i shall find out when you next update, which i hope will be soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Poor Kera, she's in quite a predicament. I cant wait to see how she handles it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() hmm, interesting. I shall read on and find out what happens next. |
![]() ![]() ![]() interesting. Meerna is quite the unlikeable charicter, but you write her very well. I cant wait to read on. |
![]() ![]() ![]() interesting...i must read on! |
![]() ![]() ![]() this just keeps getting better and better, i cant wait to read more of it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Totally LOVED this chapter and those leading up to it. I think Caden can help Kera clear her mind of doubts. Cool story of when he dumped her in the pond. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Go Kera! She should have smacked Meerna up side the head! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like this chapter a lot. Kera's personality is developing nicely. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is very good, i shall read on. |
![]() ![]() ![]() very interesting, i cant wait to see what happens next. |
![]() ![]() ![]() this seems very interesting, I like it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Such a cool first chapter. This story holds promise. I think you have the imagination to make this genre really work for you. Keep up the good work. Update soon! |