Reviews for Heart Divided
Stang65 chapter 88 . 2/12/2008



WRONG ANSWER, soldier! LOL! Come on, Kera, show him what you're made of... *BIG grin while waggling eyebrows*
Tuiki chapter 88 . 1/26/2008
owee. Kera is a bit defensive herself...mentally anyway. But then again, she's not my character so I can't say what I would do. *cue sheepish giggle*

As usual please continue.
Tuiki chapter 87 . 1/18/2008
...What just happened?

Oy...continue please! I need to know more...
X0ImaginaryGirl0X chapter 87 . 1/16/2008
OMG! What happened to her! Tell Me! TELL ME! XD
liminalzest chapter 87 . 1/15/2008
an updates, finally! and a cliffhanger at that! lol
Stang65 chapter 87 . 1/15/2008
I like this chapter. It was interesting, especially the dream she had. What a nightmare THAT would be - to find yourself marrying a jerk like Rindran, and then seeing all your loved ones and friends either in danger or dead.

I wasn't quite sure what happened after she woke up. The description was a good use of first person reality (if there is such a term - you know what I mean). Either way, yeah... Cyril is always there when she needs him... they are so sweet together. AW!

Update soon!
Stang65 chapter 86 . 1/11/2008
So... Loeran is one of the GOOD GUYS? I'm glad he was there to help Kera escape, but he seems like kind of a jerk to the Keelites. Oh well, there is no love lost on the Keelites' side either, so I guess they're even.

Poor Kade is still upset about his brother. He's so sweet.

I hope Kera doesn't make any rash decisions about returning to Zura - even with the protection of a group like Loeran's, she would be in a lot of danger.

So, when does the war actually begin? Are these people gonna get the chance to show off their fighting skills or not? When do we get to see the Zurate smack down? It should be really good... lol.

K, later alligator.
Tuiki chapter 86 . 1/3/2008
Aye, here is a moment where I find it difficult to know who to believe...and cliff hangars stink.

Well I guess it is up to everyone's actions to believe or not.

Sorry for the late review...
Stang65 chapter 85 . 12/13/2007



FINALLY! Rindran is FINALLY getting a good beating... He deserves so much worse, in my opinion. I love it that you talk about Kera's internal battle with the opposite sides of her personality. It makes her sound very human but not schizophrenic - if that makes sense...

Anyway, I LOVED this chapter! My favorite part is the end where Kera whacks Cyril - it is exactly like her to do that, but still so cute. Cyril is a sweetheart. Totally loved Kade laughing at the whole 'beating Rindran' scene.

GREAT JOB! Update soon please...
Stang65 chapter 84 . 12/13/2007
GREAT chapter! Love the part where the bird intervenes and chases Rindran. He's such an idiot.

By therapeutic do you mean that Kera is gonna beat some sense into Rindran? He could certainly use it, and Kera could use the exercise!

LOVED this chapter!
liminalzest chapter 61 . 12/13/2007
i liked the story so far but there are far too many people "rolling their eyes" all the time. i've begun rolling my eyes every time that phrase pops up. also, some of the adjectives describing emotions seem inappropriate, such as a grimace or a sneer when smiling at a friend. of course, they're your characters and maybe you do want them to grimace or sneer at that point. it just seems a little incongruent to the reader. otherwise, good job especially on handling the subject of a female warrior in male dominion.
Cass Boothe chapter 85 . 12/11/2007
There is such a thing as a story being too long.
Tuiki chapter 85 . 12/11/2007
Aww...well I'll always review. :)

This story needs more than 1 review...PEOPLE READ HER STORY AND REVIEW. Don't be lazy.. :3

Wonder if Rindran is dead by now...or critically damaged. Either way he's still in bad shape...
Tuiki chapter 84 . 11/14/2007

I dunno if that was supposed to be a cliff-hangar, even if it wasn't, I feel it is...

don't stop! D8

Stang65 chapter 83 . 10/29/2007
Oh... Very cool... Kera has found an ally when she least expected it... I hope Loeran is not trying to set her up or anything... He sounds pretty genuine though. If she does escape, I hope Kera gets a chance to kick Rindran's sorry butt. Creep!
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