Reviews for Ribbons
This Modern Love chapter 1 . 10/17/2006
If this was formatted at least somewhat along the lines of poetry, it would be easier to read. As it was , I almost stopped, but there was a nice flow and the wording was careful.
MFB Ortega chapter 1 . 10/12/2006
whoah. you definately have a great talent for imagery! i love all of the metaphors you used in here. really liked this one: "silvers eyes winking wickedly in the dark". it was really neat to read. short and to the point. awesome.