Reviews for Undiscipline
GrangerDanger333 chapter 3 . 9/18/2012
Ahaha! This is so good. Some spelling mistakes but it doesn't take much away from the story. Funny as well. Short and sweeet! :)
anon chapter 3 . 11/9/2009
hot, hot and very erotic.
RainAddict CM chapter 3 . 9/6/2009
damn! good story! very hot ) i hope you do a sequel to this...
beaumont santana chapter 3 . 10/22/2008
O...M...G...

Hot. That was great.
Always Pencil chapter 3 . 8/23/2008
WHOO! THEY ARE FREAKY AS HELL!
Always Pencil chapter 2 . 8/23/2008
That was so cool.
Always Pencil chapter 1 . 8/23/2008
What a bitch.
Somewhere In Between chapter 3 . 6/26/2007
m just have to say.. kinky
Coda Lovelance chapter 3 . 6/8/2007
you're so good at this. i've only read two of your stories so far: this one and "one night" but they're both *amazing*. i can clearly picture what's happening, but the passion/emotion/intensity isn't compromised by descriptive words. i don't know how you do it, but you better keep writing!

your stories could be movies or short films, easy.

so igniting- great job.
Islandgyal2004 chapter 3 . 1/13/2007
Cool story
hppygrl chapter 1 . 10/19/2006
Alex is hot, going after the older woman. Makes me want a tough older woman. Are you writing more to this story?
Tmorras chapter 3 . 10/19/2006
Wow... you don't half write hot stuff. I never thought Alex would have don't that. Will read more of your stuff
sam chapter 1 . 10/18/2006
gud