Reviews for Revisited: Notice
Frore chapter 1 . 10/18/2006
Aw. This poem summons up the feelings of self pity that we all, undoubtedly, feel at some point or another.

The grammar of this composition is a little off. Remember to capitalize your ā€œIā€s and to begin each stanza with an upper case letter ā€“ sometimes, even something so small as double checking the mechanics of a piece can make a difference.