|Reviews for God's Watching Her Fall|
| Maggot Blood chapter 1 . 10/19/2006
Out of all the other poems I have read and reviewed by you this is your best one. I love it, OMG words can't explain at how amazing it it. Too perfect.
| poetic abortion chapter 1 . 10/18/2006
You know I love you, but this just has to have it said: I. Love. You.
Your poetry is stunning.
The repitiontion of "the planets pass her by" is stunning and beautiful and amazing and you own my heart because you repeat it so well.
And, "sagging under the weight of the past, lagging and staying back, she’s last" is such a pretty line.
There are so many pretty lines.