Reviews for You don't know me, but I know you
Fact or Fiction chapter 1 . 11/4/2006
Creepy. Very, very creepy. I actually got shivers as I was reading this. Your descriptions of his feelings towards her, they were just superb. I actually glanced into the mind of a rapist/stalker/killer, great job. The only problem is that you repeated some of the lines way too much. Once or twice is fine, but sometimes it's too many, and I thought I lost my place. What a very twisted man, yet somehow you can kind of understand his mind-set. Very good, I liked it, maybe you could edit away some of the repeating lines, and this would be even better. Great job on an absolutely creept poem - it did show how the minds of those people work, something very hard to accomplish. Happy writing,

Fact or Fiction