Reviews for Death Mountain
Chocolate Trifle chapter 1 . 10/22/2006
Great story. You built up loads of tension and made it funny at the same time.

This is exactly how I feel on roller coasters. :)
Danny D chapter 1 . 10/20/2006
hmm...this ride sounds awful familiar. lol. i liked space mountain much better though :-)

P.S. i agree that twice would proabably be enough
Cesalie Chase chapter 1 . 10/20/2006
I love this! You've totally captured the anxiety of Splash Mountain. I went on it for the first time in 2005, and I felt like I was going through it again with everything you described. (Especially how it starts out so peaceful... and then, BAM.) Scary! I especially loved how you wrote "Click" between paragraphs, near the end, to emphasize the suspense of the experience. The ending is hilarious, too-it perfectly wraps up the story. Thanks for an awesome read! You're extremely talented. This totally made my day. Rock on!