Reviews for Almost There
purple x pen chapter 1 . 2/20/2008
i love the optimism of this piece.
Kathryn chapter 1 . 10/19/2006
I like it, sad :( But I like the flow and the way the ending sounds. Good Job!
SoMyLuck chapter 1 . 10/19/2006
Short and sweet. The repetition in this poem really goes well.

I also like the theme. It is something a large amount of people can relate to, I'm sure.

It is a sad poem, but I think it could maybe make someone want to recover from a broken relationship.
L. A. Solvang chapter 1 . 10/19/2006
This one was really sweet! I think the fact it's just a "few lines" that makes it hold that (bitter) sweetness. I'm impressed you made it rhyme, too, in a more original way then I usually see. Well done. :D!