Reviews for Gates of Heaven
felicia13 chapter 1 . 10/27/2006
Everything kind of went quiet when I read this. Which is a whole bunch of amazing because I'm listening to music on my computer AND a CD player, my brother is playing a loud-ish computer game behind me, and my other brother is watching TV semi-loudly. Pretty crazy.

But also a sign of a good poem.

There were some good points here. Like "I look beyond my future’s grave/There is nothing in the twilight sky". I think it's cool and nice. Way to go you!