|Reviews for Two words|
| FutureActress chapter 1 . 10/19/2006
Aw I love this, right up until the end I felt like I was parting with someone I loved, nice ryhme aswell. good job!
| Frore chapter 1 . 10/19/2006
Sweet poem, definitely not overwhelmingly long to read. )
I think the short verses sometimes broke up the flow of the speech, so maybe next time, try condenscing? However I liked this part a lot:
that hold a lifetime
that cut a lifeline..."