Reviews for Jefferson Hill's Royalty |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Gossh! WHERE R U GIRL? You haven't updated in 3 years! R u dead or sth? |
![]() ![]() ![]() WOW! This is really good! I can't wait for more! And I think its pretty obvious who she is. Amber. :! Love, Dani (Read my stories! :?) |
![]() ![]() ![]() it seems like u got a good plot. i like it so far. i hpope u continue. i think the story is aobut amber. u said she was the one. isnt she the bitch? update soon please and thank u. |
![]() ![]() ![]() interesting...could it be...Gen...maybe Amber...maybe Dee? |
![]() ![]() ![]() this is very interesting! a brand new twist to the cliche stories around.. :) continue writing! i wonder if the persona's amber.. heh. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Lol. I like it. It shows promise. Update soon. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() That's awesome, because I didn't expect that the narrator was one of them; she sounds like she hates them, except for when she says that the girls are good friends. Can I make a prediction...? I think the narrator is Amber, but that's just me. If I'm wrong, I owe you one. This is a very interesting story, and has a lot of potential. I can't wait to see what you do with it! Keep writing, please! -bOOkface31- |
![]() ![]() ![]() C: love it! |