Reviews for Not No Good
felicia13 chapter 1 . 10/27/2006
You know what? This was so cool and I could hear this being sung because it was all flowly in my head and ... it rocked.

But the last lines were weird. "If a stone hit you you’d have the better bleed" What? It was just out of nowhere. Nonetheless, I think this rocks, is awesome, and dominates. All at the same time.

Write on!

MySweetPrince chapter 1 . 10/25/2006
Hello, it's me again, haven't been on ff for a while so thought i'd check out your latest stuff.

gahh... it's not the best but I still quite like it. Tis different, plus I had a weird southern accent reading it in my head, don't ask why I just did, which made it more fun!

lol.. I think this poem is okay but the others I've read are way better and seem more meaningful too. Keep it up anywho...
C. F. Handle chapter 1 . 10/24/2006
I like your other work better. This seems too forced. Your other work is more beautiful in its own perfect way xD