|Reviews for baby learns a lesson|
| Talyth chapter 1 . 12/8/2006
You rock. For reals.
Your poetry is so awesomely raw and true. I love it.
| by His blood chapter 1 . 10/28/2006
i can feel vomit climbing up my throat as i read this. this is making me hurt so fucking badly, all the memories rushing back again. all the sex references remind me of this girl i still love, who left without saying goodbye (it's complicated), and last year i would listen to her talk in vivid detail about whoever was fucking her that weekend. i never cried, because after a while i became too numb to feel it. but fuck, you make me ache with this. i adore your writing.
this is fucking powerful. just strong and seething and fuck, it's incredible. definitely a favorite.
| Maggot Blood chapter 1 . 10/20/2006
Thats fucking insane, my god I was in shook most of the time, in the good way don't worry I love this fucking poem. Keep writting them like this and you are going to get so many more fans. Good fucking job.