|Reviews for cyberspace|
| Gilded Coins chapter 1 . 10/21/2006
Although I don't know much about the technical aspects of poetry, I liked the rhyming scheme: the alternation between "here" and words ending with a long E. The unexpected rhymes also helped the poem flow better. It reads nicely; it's concise and straight-forward.
And the meaning, of course, is very true... something anyone who has been on cyberspace can relate to. Too bad people abuse the anonymity, freedom, and protection the internet offers. It's sad to think fear is what keeps some people from acting like morons.
| in theory chapter 1 . 10/20/2006
I like the rhyme that pushes this forwards, it gives you more to digest than just the message. choose to be and captivity is an interesting rhyme too. (to me they're opposites, but you pair them..) nice work