Reviews for Cinderella Never Saw This One Coming
Guest chapter 24 . 5/13/2018
This story was absolutely wonderful. I really love how different fairy tales are intertwined with the story. It made it unique, brilliant, entertaining and cute! I'm glad of the one shots you put in the end. It cleared up a lot on what actually was going on with Rose. Thank you for sharing this story with us! :)
Guest chapter 15 . 11/19/2015
Chris594 chapter 5 . 11/14/2015
All these threats in the AN make you sound like a deranged serial killer. Really hope that Sadie grows a spine really soon. Great chapter.
Chris594 chapter 3 . 11/13/2015
When your good intentions turn around and bite you. "Dad, move on and get a wife". And then in walks the stepmom, complete with a set of not so nice stepsisters.
Chris594 chapter 2 . 11/13/2015
This chapter was perfectly okay.
Chris594 chapter 1 . 11/13/2015
Great start.
LaGrid chapter 22 . 9/24/2015
I liked the twists you did with the original.
The "nearly-stepmother" never actually prevented Sadie from going to the ball, which surprised me a little bit, and actually gave her hairstyle tips and a dress? Wtf? I liked the twists! It kept me on my toes. I kept waiting for her, and the twins to get worse and worse, but they actually improved?
BUT...I felt like I read this under a hour. No joke! Therefore I would've happily read more chapters, but poof, it was all over. Anyways, thanks for writing this way back then.
LaGrid chapter 17 . 9/24/2015
Haha, I like how Sadie is actively trying to break the engagement off. Though it backfired with Jerry pretending to be in Eyeball Piercing, didn't it? :D Dru was lapping it up!
LaGrid chapter 10 . 9/24/2015
I seriously love your story. Sadie is stupid, annoyingly stupid, what with Flor, Lucy and Dru having so much control of her life, when she doesn't even know them that well, and they revealed their true colors pretty early on. Can she stop being a wimp, for like, two seconds? But at the same time, she uses very cool Star Wars references, has a unique train of thought, and is able to be snarky in other areas of her life. So, I'm just rolling with it.
ILoveGoodBooks777 chapter 10 . 7/29/2015
Why is she so... weak? Fight back! Urrrgggghhh. I'm so fed up with the way she's handling all these situations. Maybe it's just me but nobody and I mean NOBODY can bully me in my own house.
LFA JLover7877 chapter 22 . 3/28/2015
I just loved this story! I really did! I laughed so hard, I loved the fairy tale references, and the way you write! I also loved how you did research on the names you used, like Sadie. I had no idea it meant princess. I felt the last chapter was a little rushed, you could have made it two(well, that's what I would have done) I really liked the characters and personalitys! You did a wonderful job on them.

There was only one thing that I didn't like about your writing; when someone asks something you write '(name) wanted to know'.

Anyway, great story! You should be very proud! I would be honoured if you would read my new story 'the one of the woods' and tell me what you think!

Well, that's all for now, LFA JLover7877 over and out. :3
yumyumbagel chapter 24 . 3/16/2015
That was phenomenal! This was one of the best stories I've ever read. Your writing style is very good. It even inspires me to write my own story now. Thank you for that.

Well, my favorite part in this story is the dance. Or rather, after the dance. It was the moment when Sadie realized that she should actually do something.

As for my least favorite part, that was the wedding scene. It was quite confusing really. I just wish you
expanded more on that.

But despite that, this was still a beautiful story. Keep writing!
gyoung chapter 22 . 12/28/2014
Liked the ending, liked the story, liked the characters. I enjoyed reading this story very much. Your style of writing is also excellent, all the more reason why I was eager to finish reading this. And, Jerry. He is lovely! Definitely one of my favorite male characters, now!
gyoung chapter 18 . 12/24/2014
I was in the middle of class reading this and Jerry just makes my inner fangirl burst out. Although I could not squeal, because I would have freakes out the guy sitting next to me, I smiled all the times Jerry came up. Love him and I love Sadie's sense of humor.
Kalift chapter 24 . 12/18/2014
Nice story.
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