|Reviews for Some Distant Today|
| Sundown chapter 1 . 10/23/2006
I enjoyed this little piece. The description of being on a train brought me back to when I was on a train to milan from paris...the dozy, yet contemplative feeling. Some sentences could perhaps have been a little shorter for stronger impact, but overall a well written, thoughtful little piece.
| Royal Bliss chapter 1 . 10/20/2006
This was very well written, short but I enjoyed it. The only thing I really have to say kind of "bad" about this was the length of some sentences, they could've been shortened. And this:
" roll the train off the train off the track"
I wasn't sure if you typed "The train off" twice on purpose to simulate it rolling or if it was an accident. But just pointing it out. Anyway, I like your style keep it up.