Reviews for This is what you do to me
Lily Lovett chapter 1 . 1/9/2009
Very heartfelt. It makes me melancholy and I know exactly how you feel.
maya chapter 1 . 4/21/2007
"The way you talk about me,

You make it sound like I'm the one who doesn't want to be with you."

Maybe the person's hinting that THEY're not the one who's against anything (but they don't know that you actually wouldn't mind at all). Eh, eh? I don't know. -

Anywho! I liked it bunches. Don't know exactly what to comment on, there are a lot of strengths in this. "Damnable" sounded nifty .
le roi des pirates chapter 1 . 10/20/2006
I love it. That sounds...wierd? But I do. It's good to me, it doesn't suck even if you say it does. I like the way you just write, and don't give a fuck what anybody says a poem should be like. You're you, and I wouldn't have it any other way. _

x account closed x chapter 1 . 10/20/2006
I love the shy, almost uncertain way this sounds like an apology.

the word...word, thought pattern you had going on, yeah, it made this taht much more awesome.

if this is centered on you, hopefully everything works out and you're able to get through the way you really feel and say the things you really mean.