Reviews for Color Me Beautiful
Jennifer chapter 1 . 2/9/2008
I now how that feels. I've been in the same position before, and i fell for eveything. I can really connect with this one. this one is beautiful.
notthecreepyfatguy chapter 2 . 11/8/2006
Wow I really love the last five lines! The rest of the poem is amazing as well!
Left On The Shelf chapter 1 . 10/22/2006
I really liked this piece, it touched me.

"to be without on essence"

did you mean an essence?

I absolutely loved the third stanza.

Great write.
riotmaker chapter 1 . 10/21/2006
oh god i love this. it's just amazing. and yeah. i can't even explain. its just gorgeous and powerful and basically left me breathless.

xoxo
notthecreepyfatguy chapter 1 . 10/20/2006
You made me cry damn it! This poem could represent a fair few of the people in my life, both the abused and the abuser. It really is wonderful!
behindstonewalls chapter 1 . 10/20/2006
another wonderful poem, i really like the line about the memories keeping you alive, but i found "to be without on essence" and "beautiFUL" a little odd, keep writing, i love your poetry