Reviews for Instinct
Alana Conleth chapter 1 . 4/4/2007
the conversation flow is fantastic. work on imagery. i like your writing. keep it up.
mystery lover chapter 1 . 3/28/2007
Overall, the story was very good. The setting was very realistic and the suspense was incredible. But one thing that I would work on if I were you is to not reveal or hint to the outcome until later on in the story. The details were great and the "instinct" was fantastic.
kayttea chapter 1 . 10/25/2006
I've heard a story a lot like this before, at least concerning the whole radio thing and the couple being alone. But your writing made up for it! )
MissieS chapter 1 . 10/25/2006
Ep! How horrifying! This is a good one too. ) Keep up the good work!
Cheeseraptor5 chapter 1 . 10/21/2006
That was a really nice one-shot; it was entertaining, had a great atmosphere, and the entire time it was just screaming with anticipation for someone to die. Nice! Although the last few lines disspointed me; once I read them I was like "Aw man! Cliche!" But that's probably just me - I hate the fantasy genre.

But all in all, I really enjoyed... great work with this!