Reviews for Digital Dialogue
Sarrrawr chapter 1 . 6/4/2007
very well written I like it
temblance chapter 1 . 1/3/2007
This felt a little ambiguous to me...it seemed like the characters were not well defined. Maybe I just wasn't reading closely enough, but I found myself confused, especially with the different formatting of certain lines. I did like the repetition of 'personality retrieval: minimal' and 'mood: bleak' though. This story was interesting and quite original, but a little editing may help to make it more clear.