Reviews for Stakeout
D0ll chapter 1 . 1/16/2010
I like this story. I like how you used just dialogue. That was different. I like reading stories about the mafia in general. Italian Princess that I am haha. It's not dramatic like I thought it would be eigher, pretty funny actuale. Anyway I like yous idea about quality writing. I'm frushrated about trying for hours to look for a decent story among the prebubesent, cliche works found here (no offence FF). But anyway I'd like to join this group. weird I never joined no club, group, society, or other in my life. But this is kind of anti which I like. Anyho my stories I'd like some critism, so if you could look maybe and reiew. I don't know if they are too cliche, or even that good perse.
Mark Piersley chapter 1 . 12/6/2008
lol, nice twist.
temblance chapter 1 . 1/3/2007
I think the ending is what really made this piece stand out. Adding that final twist explained some of the informality of the dialogue towards the beginning. All while I was reading, I kept thinking that something was not quite right...something didn't fit. But the ending explained that well :)

Anyway, nice job.
bluerinse chapter 1 . 11/29/2006
made me laugh! D especially the ending which i think was great D good on ya!