Reviews for Two Men & Too Much Alcohol
krantz chapter 1 . 1/8/2011
Nice and original. I like how this story consists of only dialogue,though the organisation of the lines themselves confuses me read.
HPRK08 chapter 1 . 5/15/2010
Amazingly original, great job. :)

Mark Piersley chapter 1 . 12/6/2008
lol...pretty original. witty dialogue.
AyumiYuy chapter 1 . 4/1/2008
Hah. That was fun. Initially the "words words" ... "more words on same line" confused me though. ; Why not just say "words words ... more words on the same line" to avoid confusion? But no problem, I figured it out. P
j.c-chic chapter 1 . 1/10/2008
A Quirky Tale chapter 1 . 6/16/2007
Huh. I actually like this. It's quite witty and I admire the dry humor. ;)
temblance chapter 1 . 1/3/2007
This was a nice example of how dialogue can completely carry a story. The characters here felt more fleshed out than some of the ones I have read from other stories on this site-nice job with that. The concept was very interesting and original as well, very cool to see how a straight man would act at a gay bar :)

Nice work.
la mocha chapter 1 . 12/19/2006
I like this. It's very orginal.
bluerinse chapter 1 . 11/29/2006
very funny and original me likes )