Reviews for Healing Heart
GothicSpook chapter 1 . 11/16/2007
I love it and can completely relate! Got in to a new relationship far two quick and in the end he did drop it.

dancingintherain chapter 1 . 11/25/2006
lovely imagery it makes the poem a great read
Kusje chapter 1 . 11/10/2006
The last lines are a killer. :]
A Face Worth Remembering chapter 1 . 11/9/2006
Short, sweet, and simple. I like it :)

Needa S chapter 1 . 11/2/2006
Great imagery, awesome write.
Hidden Lies chapter 1 . 10/27/2006
I like this. It is really good, I love the imagery. Keep it up!
Manuel Fajar chapter 1 . 10/25/2006
It's said humans are now one big machine,

With parts that can exchange one for the next,

& Organs that fail once then are bought new,

Only heart's passions remain soul's weakness;

It's said that metallurgy has improved,

The tensile strength at which our heart strings break,

& X-rays have discovered where flaws lay,

Embedded in the crystals of man's heart;

It's said that there are ways to vulcanize,

With rubbers impenetrable man's heart,

So that the rains of Love no longer wash,

The residues of heart from within soul;

But, I know that there's no technology,

Can fix those cracks that Love has wrought inside,

No argon arc welding will ever do,—

What one soft kiss or warm caress can glue.
elvenstorm chapter 1 . 10/23/2006
This was really interesting especially how you used no punctuation but somehow it still worked. It is a very sweet sentiment as well. The ending especially is lovely, well done!
Princess-anna57 chapter 1 . 10/22/2006
Aw, short and sweet. Great! I really like this one! _ I have no suggestions to improve, hehe! _ Write on!

~Anna~ _
bracelet-suicide chapter 1 . 10/21/2006
Love it.