|Reviews for Healing Heart|
| GothicSpook chapter 1 . 11/16/2007
I love it and can completely relate! Got in to a new relationship far two quick and in the end he did drop it.
| dancingintherain chapter 1 . 11/25/2006
lovely imagery it makes the poem a great read
| Kusje chapter 1 . 11/10/2006
The last lines are a killer. :]
| A Face Worth Remembering chapter 1 . 11/9/2006
Short, sweet, and simple. I like it :)
| Needa S chapter 1 . 11/2/2006
Great imagery, awesome write.
| Hidden Lies chapter 1 . 10/27/2006
I like this. It is really good, I love the imagery. Keep it up!
| Manuel Fajar chapter 1 . 10/25/2006
It's said humans are now one big machine,
With parts that can exchange one for the next,
& Organs that fail once then are bought new,
Only heart's passions remain soul's weakness;
It's said that metallurgy has improved,
The tensile strength at which our heart strings break,
& X-rays have discovered where flaws lay,
Embedded in the crystals of man's heart;
It's said that there are ways to vulcanize,
With rubbers impenetrable man's heart,
So that the rains of Love no longer wash,
The residues of heart from within soul;
But, I know that there's no technology,
Can fix those cracks that Love has wrought inside,
No argon arc welding will ever do,—
What one soft kiss or warm caress can glue.
| elvenstorm chapter 1 . 10/23/2006
This was really interesting especially how you used no punctuation but somehow it still worked. It is a very sweet sentiment as well. The ending especially is lovely, well done!
| Princess-anna57 chapter 1 . 10/22/2006
Aw, short and sweet. Great! I really like this one! _ I have no suggestions to improve, hehe! _ Write on!
| bracelet-suicide chapter 1 . 10/21/2006