Reviews for Fall
Erlkoenigin chapter 1 . 1/9/2009
Du fängst gut ein, was den herbst ausmacht, diese Mischung aus Schönheit und Abschiedsstimmung, "Decay" klingt viel besser als Verfall
keringo chapter 1 . 11/29/2006
i like the vivid description that evokes the sense of smell and sight and touch...great job! keep writing )
Nobody-n-Particular chapter 1 . 11/18/2006
The Forgotten Maiden chapter 1 . 10/25/2006
Very lovely. Much better than my own.
bipedalcooney chapter 1 . 10/24/2006
Beautiful, I love the mood and the imagry in this. Definatley keep writing.
Succulent chapter 1 . 10/23/2006
This is not a Haiku, and even if it was it wouldn't be good.
Kalopsia chapter 1 . 10/22/2006
o, this is a beautiful poem about fall. great diction! i can smell the leaves and feel the autumn sun
greenGalilee chapter 1 . 10/22/2006
The descriptions are lovely. Good job.
brokendreams21 chapter 1 . 10/22/2006
I think you captured the 'fall' moment right here. Lovely tanka. I love how you used the colon. I, myself, am not good at I can admire it. ) The last line was a good conclusion to everything. Great job!
Crossing the Rubicon chapter 1 . 10/22/2006
This is a lovely tanka. My favorite lines are: Sunshine pretending/ To warm the autumn silence"
Elliptical Shapes chapter 1 . 10/22/2006
Yeah, you captured it very effectively in the first line, a wonderful myriad of texture here.

Keep writing