Reviews for Phobos
felicia13 chapter 1 . 10/27/2006
Eyes? Well, it certainly is interesting ... double-faced poems such as this one are some of my favorites, since they can be interpreted so many ways. It's nice.

Felicia.
emeraude-irlandais chapter 1 . 10/24/2006
Phobos...would be a moon of Mars, right? Do correct me if I've just proven myself an astronomical (pardon the pun) idiot. :) Lovely, though "cornea" is just a funny word, regardless of context. "fire of Phobos" is exceptionally gorgeous. bella
Elliptical Shapes chapter 1 . 10/22/2006
Great image. That third line is fantastic, wish i'd thought of it!

Alan.