Reviews for The Broken Bird
4NeverAfter chapter 1 . 11/4/2006
Very, very nice I must say. The words flow so perfectly together and i can feel the emotion seeth throughout every word in this poem.

Thank you for the reveiw on my poem 'Dead as your World'. And no, it is not a fictional poem. Little to nothing I write is...I suspect that you understand this in that I don't think yours is fictional, either. (there is too much written about one technical subject for it to be fictional)

Again very, very nicely done. I hope to hear more from you soon.
Moondog Dozier chapter 1 . 10/31/2006
Sad and honest portrayal. The reader can relate to the individual easily through the descriptions that you've used. Well written.
NOLONGERAVAILABLE chapter 1 . 10/22/2006
great job. it made me want to reach out and help her. very well written. it's sad to think that so many people experience this sort of emotional/physical torture on a daily basis.
bipedalcooney chapter 1 . 10/22/2006
I like this poem, there seems to be more to it and it's topic than it seems. Well written, keep writing.