Reviews for Reading
Ecarlet chapter 1 . 2/23/2007
I like the slow building of tension in this poem, the full stop is certinaly satisfying.

Your use of words is just right, my favourite part is the creamy thin slice - great imagery. Had me drooling.
bipedalcooney chapter 1 . 11/9/2006
Vivid imagry, I like the mood in this. The way it ended is great too. Awesome work and keep writing.
BearHeart chapter 1 . 10/25/2006
I enjoyed reading this poem. Very good. BH