|Reviews for Shhh Don't Say a Word!|
| REN4488X chapter 1 . 7/8/2014
Your story was very well written especially one told in a first person point of view. You truly made each horrific moment and emotion so vivid and real.
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| HK Shmetty chapter 1 . 10/12/2010
Wow, I did not expect the ending. This was amazing. You could really tell how furious the shooter was. Great job!
| Neferpaige111 chapter 1 . 6/6/2010
wow great story :) AMAZING :) so the teacher was molesting him or what?
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| justaghost chapter 1 . 3/17/2010
You're grammar needs some work, to be honest with you. You have punctuation in places it shouldn't be.
| MusicKillsThePain chapter 1 . 12/13/2009
good story, but needs a better ending.
| Halfbloodlycan chapter 1 . 6/17/2009
Hm, what an interesting story. I did like the buildup of suspense. I didn't expect Mr. Stevenson to be a target.
Just a small, minor error I noticed.
*made me feel even worse
| saraelle chapter 1 . 3/28/2009
this story was filled with suspence.
loved every single part of it!
keep writing! :)
| astrosono chapter 1 . 2/4/2009
OHMIGOD THIS WAS AWESOME! I had a teacher EXACTLY like Mr. Stevenson, but unfortunately, he hasn't been gunned down...yet...
Anywya, great story! Keep writing!
| DemolishedDream chapter 1 . 9/13/2008
"They’re footsteps were fading."
Gotta change it to 'their'.
I'm not sure what Stephenson did to the 'murderer' (before he got his revenge anyways), but I have a suspicion that the Sine Ratio's at fault. *giggle*
Anyways, not bad. A nice action sequence.
| Ventus Shadows chapter 1 . 6/30/2008
Awesome, nice job.
| RapeOfTheWorld chapter 1 . 11/10/2007
thats one pretty smart story line!
who wouldve though...
(: loved it.
| dead already chapter 1 . 4/6/2007
I have to admit, your summary amused me a little- I looked at it and thought, you know, sometimes I wish that would happen during one of my math classes. Shows you how much I hate math.
Not so horror, but it's still scary- it's more suspenseful than anything. I don't know if that made any sense.