| Reviews for Shhh Don't Say a Word! |
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   REN4488X chapter 1 . 7/8/2014 Your story was very well written especially one told in a first person point of view. You truly made each horrific moment and emotion so vivid and real. |
| Piercedbutterflies chapter 1 . 6/26/2012 nice!3 |
| HK Shmetty chapter 1 . 10/12/2010 Wow, I did not expect the ending. This was amazing. You could really tell how furious the shooter was. Great job! |
| Neferpaige111 chapter 1 . 6/6/2010 wow great story :) AMAZING :) so the teacher was molesting him or what? |
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| justaghost chapter 1 . 3/17/2010 You're grammar needs some work, to be honest with you. You have punctuation in places it shouldn't be. |
| MusicKillsThePain chapter 1 . 12/13/2009 good story, but needs a better ending. |
| Halfbloodlycan chapter 1 . 6/17/2009 Hm, what an interesting story. I did like the buildup of suspense. I didn't expect Mr. Stevenson to be a target. Just a small, minor error I noticed. *made me feel even worse ~Lycan |
| saraelle chapter 1 . 3/28/2009 this story was filled with suspence. loved every single part of it! great job, keep writing! :) saraelle. |
| astrosono chapter 1 . 2/4/2009 OHMIGOD THIS WAS AWESOME! I had a teacher EXACTLY like Mr. Stevenson, but unfortunately, he hasn't been gunned down...yet... Anywya, great story! Keep writing! |
| DemolishedDream chapter 1 . 9/13/2008 "They’re footsteps were fading." Gotta change it to 'their'. I'm not sure what Stephenson did to the 'murderer' (before he got his revenge anyways), but I have a suspicion that the Sine Ratio's at fault. *giggle* Anyways, not bad. A nice action sequence. |
| Ventus Shadows chapter 1 . 6/30/2008 Awesome, nice job. |
| RapeOfTheWorld chapter 1 . 11/10/2007 thats one pretty smart story line! who wouldve though... (: loved it. |
| dead already chapter 1 . 4/6/2007 I have to admit, your summary amused me a little- I looked at it and thought, you know, sometimes I wish that would happen during one of my math classes. Shows you how much I hate math. Not so horror, but it's still scary- it's more suspenseful than anything. I don't know if that made any sense. |