well, i only have time for a quick review, it's late, and i've been working all day.

few things:

-jeez, tommy's shallow

-ah, haven't seen luke, 'cause he's too busy macking on lena (dirty whores the both of them)

-jared is so adorably sad. i'm curious about the whole michelle thing, hopefully we'll get to see something about that if possible

-I CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE ZACH AND JESSE CONFUSION! AH! It's so mindboggling! i think Zach's really got a lot of potential to be someone really great and Jesse was the first kiss and AW wow! it's great! I'M SO EXCITED!

o.O and now sleep deprivation is creeping in and i must depart.

much thanks for the message and i will keep checking the inbox for an update!

~bleu *grin*

LOL! Awesome chaps. You've got to update soon! (Hurt the grandma for ruffling through the drawers!)

Interesting... is Uma going to undergo a huge change and come out looking normal? Or will she be crushed?

I think I just killed myself and died over and over again when I saw my review was a measley "Meh, I"

I shouldn't be so stupid x_X.

My computer glitched earlier lol.

And really, I'm not sure I could rewrite what I said. So I guess I'll give you another review.

I really like your story.

It's exciting, intresting, and something people can relate too.

And really really funny P.

I want to see what happens.

Personally I want her to go for Zack, but whatever flows in your boat

And like some of your other reviewers I think Luke is cheating on her and blah blah blah. And well.. Jesse is just there _.

I hope you update soon.

Oh and just for the fun of it...

I LEIK LUV YOUR STORY IT IS SO AWESOME IT WOULD BE A BESTSELLER AND YOU WOULD GET LIEK MIILIONS OF LLEIK DOLLARS WOOTz!

3

Your story is past potential..

"It's fucking awesome"

P

Meh, I

cute chapter. there were barely mistakes (that i could catch) so i think u did really well ]

I like it, but it hink it might be dragging on a little too long. Wheres the story going? is luke cheating on her?

woot an update!

haha! i really like this story! AH! OMIGAWD! i think that Luke, THAT BASTARD! is cheating on poor poor Maddy with Lena, THAT DIRTY MAN WHORE AND THAT EVIL BITCH! AND OH NO! Zach totally likes Maddy! AND OH MY GOD! JESSE LIKES HER TOO! AH! can you say, "soap opera!"? bet you can, 'cause i totally just did and if i can do it, then you can too. . oh, heavens, if this was my life, i'd just have to scream. AHCK! and could that woman HATE our poor Maddy anymore? AH! don't answer that! i don't want Maddy to have to suffer too much more. even though those brothers of hers will totally take care of anything that troubles her (and possibly create more for the dear girl). alrighty then, so now that my randomness ridden review is being forcefully drawn to a close, i will wish you happy writing and best of luck in the chapters to come, to which i will be eagerly looking forward to. fic is definitely going on my favs. later!

~Bleu

well... Very Interesting. i think it's a fun story but she's floating (kinda) between three guys, yes? is a rubber an eraser? Because in my neck of the woods 'a rubber' is a slang term for a condom... yea, so you can probably guess why the first sentence of your story confused me, given that context. I guess it has to be an eraser she was throwing (or thought of throwing) ...Pencil...Pen...(now insert something 'rubber' and commonly associated with writing utensils)... and Viola! i came up with Eraser! one o those pink or white huge ones that are about the size of a pack of gum? Am i right? huh? huh? huh? My bobble head turtle seem to agree with me... but they seem to agree with me no matter what... oh well.

-Belle

P.S UPDATE SOON (A.K.A In the next five minutes)

hey, I found your story today and I really like it. I love Maddy's character. She's really funny. She has three guys for her but I would say Zach is the one I like the best. There's something fishy about Luke and Jesse just isn't Zach! :D I'll stop rambling now. Keep up the good work.

um... what's a "rubber" ?

-Belle

A very interesting story, although if I were Madison I would have socked the grandma and trained my brothers not to punch everyone AGES ago! I get the feeling Luke and Lena are dancing around each other, and love the Jesse/Zach/Madeline thing you've got going! Update soon!

*can't stop laughing* ah amazing story :D

I like this story so far ] I'm kind of torn between Zach and Jesse. hmm... yeah, I just can't decide lol update soon! ]