WHOO! Someone had a fun night.

this was an awesome hook. made me want to read more every step of the way. D

REALLY ADORABLE.

Maddy is such a lovable character.

Thanks. I'm glad you like my reviews. I try to make them meaningful. LOL.

So anyway, Maddy was pretty funny. As always. Haha. Can't wait for the next chapter where Zach would - or not - tell her about what she did?

And WHERE is LUKE? I am beginning to think he is not faithful. Despite the hickey thing that you've overruled.. Haha. But still, I want to think of him hiding a hickey. It still shows guilt. LOL.

its really good! i think maddy should hook up w/ zach. cauz its clear shes questioning her feelings about him and its very clear he lyks her. yeah. the last part wen shes arguing w/ herself is really funny, i do that sumtimes... well, keep up the good work and UPDATE very soon plez

Lol! Awesome! She's funny...blond baby..

The word was frequently used throughout the whole story.

Update soon!

i really really loved this story and you should hurry with part 13

for some reason Luke seems more like a Zach to me and Zach seems more like a Luke. I think it's because I like the name Luke better, and I like Zach the best out of all of the guys. I mean, Jesse's alright, don't get me wrong, but I just like Zach way better.

Aw poor Zachy boy, I think he has a wittle crush. haha i think Luke is gay, it would explain an awfull lot.

Thanks for updating!...Despite how you were tired and all. :]

ahaha. lol. ur right. she does need some people who hate her. lol. i wasnt thinking about the whole plot thing. haha.

lysol.. its erm.. a disinfectant. ahha.. :P

oh. by the way. i love this chapter. coz maddy was funny. she was i love her drunkeness. have u ever been drunk? lol. coz i've never been drunk.. too bitter. lol. and yeah.. since i've never been drunk i can't write about being drunk, u know? lol.

i think... that luke is hiding something beneath his collar. like. a hickey? lol. and that he is hiding from someone! but that's just me..

-till next time!

-ayeza

No such word as "spelt". It's "spelled".

Lol! She's drunk! You have to update soon! Funny spot to stop!

i love this story!it is so good. i wish i had bros like that. but then i got friends like that, so y do i need them? is something going to happen w/ maddy and zach? after all she did give him a kiss, it may have been on the cheek, but it was still a kiss! UPDATE SOON!

HA oh man i laughed so hard in this chapter, pity it was so short *insert puppy dog look*. She's such super duper dunk! hmm so I'm wondering what luke is hiding, i hope it's nothing too bad.