Reviews for Butterfly Fingers
Yeeger chapter 1 . 1/14/2007
Darkly romantic... wonderfully and skillfully captured. I love it.

~Yeeger
forgottenlife chapter 1 . 11/26/2006
dark...i like...write more like this...
The Ink Blot chapter 1 . 11/12/2006
It's positively delightful! I loved the darker, yet still romantic sides on this. Simple, and elegant. It's a very interesting take on romance, but all for the better!

You did a great job. I loved the imaginary.

~Katherine

(bd21)

PS Sorry I couldn't review this earlier. )
ygg chapter 1 . 11/7/2006
Wow that feels so different than many other Haiku. Very unusual diction, but it fits perfect and creates a romantic picture which is pleasantly dark and mysteriously inspiring. The title is absolutely great! A favorite!
Thenardier chapter 1 . 10/28/2006
For some strage reason, this reminds me of Hugo's Notre Dame de Paris. I guess it must be the gothic romance presence? I don't know. Anyways, this is fabulous, though if I were you, I would not use capitals for the 2nd and 3rd line, it's all one sentance. It would make it flow better. Anyways, once again, a lovely piece.
Basara chapter 1 . 10/26/2006
darkly romantic...

nice...
Endless Nightmares chapter 1 . 10/26/2006
Very good haiku. Made me think of a spider having feelings for a butterfly.
Aquafied chapter 1 . 10/25/2006
chilling

i quite like it

how tall are you?
BearHeart chapter 1 . 10/25/2006
I like it. BH
Elizabeth Bilberry chapter 1 . 10/24/2006
Simple yet lovely. Thank you for putting a smile on my face.

EB
bipedalcooney chapter 1 . 10/24/2006
I love the imagry here and the dark edge to it. This has life to it.
Galadh Niniel chapter 1 . 10/24/2006
Beautiful, the imagery is superb.
Moondog Dozier chapter 1 . 10/23/2006
Very visual. Well written haiku.
emeraude-irlandais chapter 1 . 10/23/2006
I knew I'd seen your pen-name before! You wrote the bell-shaped poem that I read, meant to review, but was cruelly distracted by...I forget. Waffles of some sort, I believe. Anyway, I've found you...and you write haiku? Unexpected, but this one is certainly lovely. Not an 'excuse for a poem', as so many haiku are. It's obvious you worked on it. :) Well, I'm excited! I have to read and review the 'bell poem'...I've forgotten the name, so excuse my ignorance in calling it that. I look forward to (hopefully) reading more by you!

~bella~
MallowsWins chapter 1 . 10/23/2006
This had a kind of Nightmare Before Christmas-esq romance to it. I love the gothic twist on the subject, not something you see as often as you'd think on a site like this. Really well done.

Daze
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